Book review, full book summary and synopsis for Local Woman Missing by Mary Kubica, a domestic mystery-thriller about a series of missing women and a missing girl who has reappeared.
Synopsis
Local Woman Missing opens with a girl, Delilah, who disappeared 11 years ago finally being found again. With her return, it reopens questions about what happened the day she and her mother went missing and another woman, Shelby Tebow, who had disappeared soon before that.
In this thrilling and carefully plotted domestic mystery, this community and these families must unravel the secrets of the chilling events from many years ago ...
(The Full Plot Summary is also available, below)
Full Plot Summary
Section-by-Section SummarySee the Section-by-Section Summary of Local Woman MissingQuick Plot SummaryThe one-paragraph version: 11 years ago, Shelby Tebow went missing and ten days later a neighbor (Meredith Dickey) and her child (Delilah Dickey) disappeared as well. In present day, Delilah has returned, unrecognizable with acid burns, after escaping the couple that abducted her. We also learn that Shelby's body was eventually found, and her husband Jason was arrested for her murder. Meredith later committed suicide. Kate and Bea, two of their neighbors, helped with the search for Meredith. In the end, we find out that "Delilah" is not actually Delilah. She's another abducted girl who was brainwashed into thinking she is Delilah (whose disappearance was well-publicized). Meanwhile, it turns out that Bea had been driving home drunk (with Meredith in the car) and ended hitting Shelby. They got rid of the body, and Bea framed Jason. However, Meredith couldn't live with the lie and insisted on going to the police. As a result, Bea killed her and made it look like a suicide. Delilah saw Bea attack Meredith, so Bea locked Delilah away. In present day, the police find the real Delilah locked up in the attic above Bea's soundproofed music studio.
Local Woman Missing jumps back and forth between multiple timelines. It opens 11 years prior with Shelby Tebow leaving the house at night to cheat on her husband, which she has done many times before. On the road, she spots a car coming towards her. The book soon reveals that 10 days later, another woman from that neighborhood (Meredith Dickey) and her child (Delilah Dickey) went missing as well.
In present day, Delilah manages to escape the dark basement that she's been captive in along with another boy, Gus. However, Gus is recaptured in the process. She rejoins her family which consists of her father Josh and her brother Leo, though they can barely recognize her because she's emaciated and scarred with acid burns. She doesn't have much of a memory of her capture since she was only six at the time. So, it's unknown that exactly happened to them all those years ago, but Meredith ended up committing suicide.
Through flashbacks, we learn that Shelby's (unclothed) body eventually was found, with her husband Jason as the primary suspect. Meanwhile, Jason thinks Shelby's obstetrician, Dr. Feingold, might be responsible. Two neighbors, Kate and Bea, who were friends with Meredith and Josh end up helping to investigate. They learn that Jason and Shelby were in the process for suing Dr. Feingold for malpractice after his birthing procedures led to a brain injury for their baby, Grace.
In present day, Delilah struggles with assimilating with her family. There's also a lot of media attention surrounding her return. She soon tells her father about the other captive boy, Gus. Quickly, the police track down the place Delilah was held captive (and physically and sexually abused) by a couple who turn out to be, Eddie and Martha Cutter of Michael, Illinois. However, Gus isn't there, and the couple has clearly fled.
Flashing back to 11 years ago, Kate and Bea also learn that Meredith had been Shelby's doula (helps with the birthing process) and had offered to testify in the malpractice suit against Dr. Feingold. Still, when Shelby's bloody clothes are found in a dumpster at Jason's workplace, Jason is arrested.
Meanwhile, Meredith had been getting threatening messages prior to her disappearance. She'd also noticed that Leo, 4 at the time, had been reluctant to go to the babysitter's house and came back with a bruise one day. Meredith eventually finds out that her friend Cassandra was responsible for the threatening messages she was getting (because Cassandra had learned that Meredith had a romantic history with her husband, Marty). And the Leo situation turns out to be a bully at the babysitter's place.
In present day, Josh takes Delilah to a hypnotist to try to jog any memories that might help them locate Gus. This leads to the revelation that Gus is only a figment of her imagination. Stuck in the dark for years, her mind created him to keep her sane.
Flashing back to 11 years ago, soon after Meredith disappeared, her body was found in a motel and it's determined to be a suicide. There's also a note saying Delilah is fine and not to go looking for her.
In present day, a childhood playmate of Delilah's, Piper Hanaka, points out to Leo that Delilah used to have a cleft chin but she no longer has one now, and it's not the type of thing that disappears over time. They soon establish that "Delilah" is not really Delilah. Instead, the police officer, Carmen (who has been working with the family on this case for many years), lied about the DNA results because she couldn't stand to see Josh disappointed once again. "Delilah" turns out to be another missing girl, Carly Byrd, who was convinced by the couple that she was Delilah Dickey (because they liked idea of the notoriety associated with Delilah's highly publicized disappearance).
Another flashback shows Meredith planning a night out with Josh where they run into Bea and Kate. They party together, but Josh and Kate eventually leave. Later, Bea and Meredith head home, drunk. Bea is driving and she hits Shelby. Meredith wants to turn herself in, but Bea reminds her that this will ruin her relationship with Josh. They end up getting rid of the body. Bea undresses the body, hoping it will prompt the police to focus on male suspects if they find it,
In present day, Carly is packing her things to leave when she runs off. The police search the neighborhood to see if she's hiding somewhere. When they try to search Bea and Kate's garage (which Bea uses as a music studio), Bea runs off as well. They end up discovering the real Delilah there, where Bea has been keeping her captive.
It turns out that when Meredith learned that Bea had framed Jason for the murders (by planting the bloody clothes), she had insisted on going to the police with the truth. As a result, Bea attacked her, took her to a motel, demanded she write a suicide note and killed her, making it look like a suicide. Delilah had seen Bea attack Meredith, so Bea has been hiding her in the attic space above the garage/studio, which is soundproofed, for the last eleven years.
In the end, the police track down Carly, and Eddie and Martha Cutter eventually return to their home and are arrested. A few days later, Bea is arrested trying to buy a fake ID. Jason Tebow is released from prison.
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I had trouble too It felt like the ending was tied up with a pretty mismatched ribbon. Good build-up, disappointing ending that came out of nowhere.
that’s a great way of putting it!
I thought this was a fantastic mystery-thriller….but….I bonded with the girl at the very beginning of the book and would have loved to have more of her insights at the end of the book.
I agree. My heart went out to that child. I would have loved to learn how she recovered.
I thought the ending was too contrived. I was disappointed after investing up until then. It was less a surprise, than are you kidding me.
I thought it was wonderfully unpredictable. It doesn’t seem so far fetched to me that someone would kill another person to protect their secret. The ridiculous part was that Bea kept the daughter locked up and her wife NEVER went inside her studio. Ever. I don’t “intrude” on my husbands space, but I’ve been in ALL his spaces. But I don’t know what else she could have done with D besides kill her, too. Which would be practically impossible for any sane human to do to a 6 year old.
I was very disappointed in the ending and felt it was just too far fetched. No reason was given at all for the police to be searching Kate and Bea’s garage attic at that point. There was no new evidence for the police to show up with Josh to search their property.
They were looking for the girl that disappeared less than 30 minutes ago from their neighbors house…. Sounds like a pretty good reason to me to search
I was very disappointed in the ending and felt it was just too far fetched. No reason was given at all for the police to be searching Kate and Bea’s garage attic at that point. There was no new evidence for the police to show up with Josh to search.
Ummm who were the 2 people looking into Meredith and Josh’s house that her friend saw when she was up in the middle of the night with her son??
Omg. I’m so upset they didn’t talk about this I was wondering too!! Waited for it
I assumed it was Bae and Meredith the night they came back from burying Shelby.
Who the hell is Delilah in the first chapters?? The actual Delilah? Or Cassidy who was the rescued girl josh and Leo realized was not their daughter/sister. I’m so confused
It was Cassidy but the old man and woman called her Delilah so that’s who she thought she was… she was brainwashed.
The ending was ridiculous and there were so many plot points that made me roll my eyes. Too bad because the first half is intriguing with a lot going on and it’s handled well. Seems like the author just kind of gave up
A little late to the game, but just read this book. I have to disagree agree with all the criticism relative to the ending. It’s fiction, the expectation is not for everything to be believable in reality.
I thought the conclusion was perfect. Everyone who says it isn’t anything that could exist in reality should consider the fact that this is the beauty of the genre of fiction.
If you actually read the book, all is explained. I’ve read many successful books where the story is long and thoughtful and the ending is an afterthought.
I think this is a fantastic book, my first by this author, and makes me want to read all the others.
Can’t figure out how to edit this- have never written on something like this before but did so because that’s how strongly I DISAGREE with all the criticism
Initial post stated both agree disagree
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